The classroom for art was spacious
yet crowded with paint-covered desks that were pushed together in clusters. I,
The Spirited Oddball, was busy with a paintbrush in my hand, a colorful piece
of paper, splattered with water, and only 3 colors to create with when two
familiar voices rose to a yell and laughter from the audience bounced off the
walls.
I unfortunately knew what was going on. The
Class Dominator and The Strange One were screeching at each other like deranged
Magpies. The Class Dominator’s words were like trained boxing punches and The
Strange One’s voice crumbled and failed to defend her. The Class Dominator
wouldn’t back down and everything she said weakened The Strange One even
further.
Eventually The Class Dominator’s
words tore through the shield of The Strange One’s pride. I was happy it was
over, happier then I was proud to concede, but my heart struck against my ribs with
a rhythmic force because I sat down, did nothing, while The Strange One called
me “friend”.
Sometimes she was annoying and
bewildering but she was tormented almost every day and she depended on me right
now.
I stood up and glared at The Class
Dominator, this would end today.
“Shut up.” I said to her in a
stern, terrorizing voice, even though my blood was melting like pancake batter.
Everyone quickly focused their
surprised, beady eyes on me and then looked at The Class Dominator. Blood
rushed through my quivering veins and my head hammered and like a bolt of
lightning charged my optimism, I felt like I was ready to face anything. I felt
pleased with myself, but I was also terrified, no one messed with The Class
Dominator.
She immediately barked at me and I growled
back. I expected her to strike me and fear was building so the yelling grew
stronger.
Panicked, yelling out of distress,
and tired of all the harassment I glared at her with furious eyes and said, “I
won’t let you stand there and mistreat her, she deserves so much more respect
than you give her and if you want to pick on her again, you’re going to have to
break through me first.”
That silenced her, knowing I wouldn’t
back down finally drilled a hole through her brain and deposited an air of
defeat.
I suppose one has to stand up to a
bully to gain one’s respect. In my case, this was the conclusion.
(A few notes, to really conclude this, I intended to do my best on the paragraphs, I don't exactly understand when to separate them but I think I did a good job, thanks for reading!)
~BrandyBug Nikkie Kinsman
(A few notes, to really conclude this, I intended to do my best on the paragraphs, I don't exactly understand when to separate them but I think I did a good job, thanks for reading!)
~BrandyBug Nikkie Kinsman
Your story is great. I really like the showing of the room and the surroundings, you bring the reader into the story, and that is wonderful. I also liked the names you gave the characters in the story, because it reminded me of the names Indians give to there first born babies. Your story is great.
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